Writing a cinquain poem

Cinquain: an unrhymed poem consisting of five lines arranged in a special way.

Planet
Graceful, ringed
Spinning, whirling, twirling
Dances with neighbor Jupiter
Saturn

A cinquain is an example of shape poetry. Because of the exact number of words required for each line of this poem, a unique, symmetrical shape is created from interesting, descriptive words.

The word cinquain comes from the Latin root for “five.” Notice that the cinquain has five lines that follow this sequence:

Line A: One vague or general one-word subject or topic.
Line B: Two vivid adjectives that describe the topic.
Line C: Three interesting “-ing” action verbs that fit the topic.
Line D: Four-word phrase that captures feeling about the topic.
Line E: A very specific term that explains Line A.

Here’s another example:

Insect
Hidden, hungry
Preening, searching, stalking
Waits as if praying
Mantis

Brainstorming

Use the tips below to brainstorm on blank paper for different ideas. Then follow the directions to write your own beautiful cinquain. When possible, try to use poetic devices like alliteration, onomatopoeia, or personification. Because the poem has a limited number of words, choose each word carefully!

Word Pair Ideas (general/specific)

  • bird/parrot (crow, canary, dove)
  • fruit/apple (pear, banana, watermelon, peach, etc.)
  • season/spring (summer/fall/autumn/winter)
  • winter/January (spring/April, summer/July, autumn/October)
  • candy/jawbreaker (Snickers, jelly beans, licorice)
  • storm/tornado (hurricane, blizzard, squall)
  • water/river (ocean, lake, stream, creek)

Line A: Name a general topic (see the suggestions above for some ideas).
Line E: Rename your topic, being more specific. (This will be the last line of your cinquain.)
Line B: Brainstorm 5-6 vivid, concrete adjectives to describe Topic E. Do not choose words that end in “-ing.”
Line C: Brainstorm 5-6 highly descriptive participles (verbs ending in ”-ing”) that fit Topic E.
Line D: Brainstorm several four-word phrases that capture some feeling about Topic E. Follow these tips to develop an effective phrase:

  • Do not use any “to be” verbs or vague words.
  • Do not repeat any words used elsewhere in the cinquain.
  • If you can’t think of something, try a combination of adjective + noun + verb + adverb to achieve the most concrete phrase possible.

Writing Your Cinquain 

  1. Pick out your most descriptive words from your brainstorming and put your cinquain together.  
  2. When you are satisfied, recopy the poem onto clean notebook paper. 
  3. Center your cinquain on the paper. 
  4. Begin each line with a capital letter, and remember your commas. Do not use ending punctuation.
  5. When finished, double-check for concreteness!

Line A. _______
Line B. _______  ,   _______
Line C. _______  ,   _______,  _______
Line D. _______ _______ _______ _______
Line E. _______

Finally, when your children are all done with their cinquains, come back and post their poems in the comment section.  We would love to see them!

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12 comments ↓

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#2 flowerzz on 02.05.09 at 12:28 pm

i really like this website

#3 Louis on 02.05.09 at 5:27 pm

It helped me with my son’s homework. He understood better what a cinquain is.

#4 Kim on 02.05.09 at 6:13 pm

So glad you’re all enjoying this activity. It’s simple, fun, and doesn’t take much time.

#5 jaybee on 03.02.09 at 3:34 am

i love it

#6 Shirley on 04.21.09 at 2:11 pm

This really help me at my homework….
Thank You!!!:)

#7 Jacob on 05.18.09 at 4:38 pm

aren’t u guys supossed to paste your own cinquians down?
heres mine
Fruit
Bright and shiny
Crunches and bursts flavor
Shiny and feels smooth to the touch
Apple

#8 Kim on 05.19.09 at 4:28 pm

Thanks for posting yours, Jacob!

#9 LinaBeana on 05.27.09 at 5:58 pm

Ah-ha-ha
Here I am…
Again….
(dont judge me =P )
Anywho, I made a new cinquain poem!
Here it iiiss! :

A White Wonderland:
Listen
As it falls down.
Like steps of passing ghosts.
Dropping by unknown.
It’s snow.

Yay! I think this is the one i’ll read to my class!
=]

#10 LinaBeana on 05.27.09 at 5:39 pm

This gave a spark of idea
because I was stuck on
a homework assigment i had to do
and this website even
helped me learn more!
Thanks!
Can’t wait to share my poem to
my classroom!
Thanks again!
=]

#11 Nikki on 05.22.11 at 5:04 pm

I need help writing my water poem, all I need is 2 more verbs and one adjective. But here is one I made earlier!
Balloons
Colorful, Rubbery
Drifting, Running, Laughing
Dancing across the sky
Pop

Thanks, hoped you liked it!

#12 Kim on 05.22.11 at 7:02 pm

I like your balloon cinquain, Nikki!