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	<title>Comments on: Editing tips for the faint of heart</title>
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		<title>By: Denise</title>
		<link>http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/05/06/editing-tips-for-the-faint-of-heart/comment-page-1/#comment-152</link>
		<dc:creator>Denise</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 07 May 2008 23:39:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I think they pick up something from watching our model. My kids aren&#039;t eager to edit &quot;schoolish&quot; assignments, but when it&#039;s something they want to write on their own (Every dang one of them is writing at least one book! They rarely get past 3-4 chapters, but still...), they take multiple edits for granted.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I think they pick up something from watching our model. My kids aren&#8217;t eager to edit &#8220;schoolish&#8221; assignments, but when it&#8217;s something they want to write on their own (Every dang one of them is writing at least one book! They rarely get past 3-4 chapters, but still&#8230;), they take multiple edits for granted.</p>
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		<title>By: Kim</title>
		<link>http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/05/06/editing-tips-for-the-faint-of-heart/comment-page-1/#comment-150</link>
		<dc:creator>Kim</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 06 May 2008 22:08:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hehe, Denise! 

If you could only imagine how many times I tweak a sentence, move a word, even edit the photo I pick! It&#039;s just part of the process for me. You&#039;re right---there&#039;s something about watching a piece of writing unfold and improve before my eyes that makes me appreciate---and actually love---the editing process. 

Ah...but with our kiddos? It does take a different approach altogether. Hopefully we can model for them so they observe us in self-editing action and realize that if our writing is better for it, theirs will be too. (Notice how I said &quot;hopefully&quot;?) :)

Thanks for stopping in!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hehe, Denise! </p>
<p>If you could only imagine how many times I tweak a sentence, move a word, even edit the photo I pick! It&#8217;s just part of the process for me. You&#8217;re right&#8212;there&#8217;s something about watching a piece of writing unfold and improve before my eyes that makes me appreciate&#8212;and actually love&#8212;the editing process. </p>
<p>Ah&#8230;but with our kiddos? It does take a different approach altogether. Hopefully we can model for them so they observe us in self-editing action and realize that if our writing is better for it, theirs will be too. (Notice how I said &#8220;hopefully&#8221;?) <img src='http://www.writeshop.com/blog/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>Thanks for stopping in!</p>
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		<title>By: Denise</title>
		<link>http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/05/06/editing-tips-for-the-faint-of-heart/comment-page-1/#comment-149</link>
		<dc:creator>Denise</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 06 May 2008 20:33:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Okay, I&#039;m weird, but I love editing. It&#039;s ever so much more fun than facing that blank page to begin with. I even like editing the same thing over and over --- I suppose that&#039;s because I can see my article getting better with every pass.

But I have to admit that editing a child&#039;s paper is more difficult. I am much better at editing my own work than at teaching my children. Thanks for some great tips!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Okay, I&#8217;m weird, but I love editing. It&#8217;s ever so much more fun than facing that blank page to begin with. I even like editing the same thing over and over &#8212; I suppose that&#8217;s because I can see my article getting better with every pass.</p>
<p>But I have to admit that editing a child&#8217;s paper is more difficult. I am much better at editing my own work than at teaching my children. Thanks for some great tips!</p>
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