Comments on: Writing a diamante poem http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/09/10/writing-diamante-poem/ From the Desk of WriteShop Wed, 10 Mar 2010 03:52:19 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.1 hourly 1 By: Abigail Fiore age 8 http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/09/10/writing-diamante-poem/comment-page-3/#comment-418 Abigail Fiore age 8 Thu, 18 Sep 2008 02:14:55 +0000 http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/09/10/writing-diamante-poem/#comment-418 Cocoon Dark, hard Working, wiggling, pushing Cage, break...free, fun Flying, flapping, fluttering Sunny, wonderful Butterfly Cocoon
Dark, hard
Working, wiggling, pushing
Cage, break…free, fun
Flying, flapping, fluttering
Sunny, wonderful
Butterfly

]]> By: ELizabeth Fiore age 12 http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/09/10/writing-diamante-poem/comment-page-3/#comment-417 ELizabeth Fiore age 12 Thu, 18 Sep 2008 01:46:02 +0000 http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/09/10/writing-diamante-poem/#comment-417 Pain Intense, terrible Suffering, torturing, piercing Ache, twitch...Ease, comfort Pleasing, captivating, loving Joyful, peaceful Pleasure Pain
Intense, terrible
Suffering, torturing, piercing
Ache, twitch…Ease, comfort
Pleasing, captivating, loving
Joyful, peaceful
Pleasure

]]> By: Sarah Fiore age 11 http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/09/10/writing-diamante-poem/comment-page-3/#comment-416 Sarah Fiore age 11 Thu, 18 Sep 2008 01:17:32 +0000 http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/09/10/writing-diamante-poem/#comment-416 Land Dry, solid Molding, growing, nourishing Desert, island...Stream, lake Drinking, flowing, bubbling Moist, wet Water Sarah, age 11 Land
Dry, solid
Molding, growing, nourishing
Desert, island…Stream, lake
Drinking, flowing, bubbling
Moist, wet
Water

Sarah, age 11

]]> By: Maria http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/09/10/writing-diamante-poem/comment-page-3/#comment-415 Maria Thu, 18 Sep 2008 01:15:03 +0000 http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/09/10/writing-diamante-poem/#comment-415 Fall Cool, nippy Chilling, blowing, darkening Leaves, wind . . . Flowers, life Blooming, blossoming, budding Warm, bright Spring Maria, age 12 Fall
Cool, nippy
Chilling, blowing, darkening
Leaves, wind . . . Flowers, life
Blooming, blossoming, budding
Warm, bright
Spring

Maria, age 12

]]> By: Maria http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/09/10/writing-diamante-poem/comment-page-3/#comment-414 Maria Thu, 18 Sep 2008 01:12:59 +0000 http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/09/10/writing-diamante-poem/#comment-414 Sun Radiant, brilliant Brightening, cheering, gleaming Shine, glow . . . Storm, shower Drizzling, sprinkling, pouring Wet, cold Rain Maria, age 12 Sun
Radiant, brilliant
Brightening, cheering, gleaming
Shine, glow . . . Storm, shower
Drizzling, sprinkling, pouring
Wet, cold
Rain

Maria, age 12

]]> By: Maria http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/09/10/writing-diamante-poem/comment-page-3/#comment-413 Maria Thu, 18 Sep 2008 01:11:05 +0000 http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/09/10/writing-diamante-poem/#comment-413 Winter Quiet, frigid Blackening, icing, snowing Flurries, chill . . . Sun, sky Shining, brightening, cheering Warm, shiny Summer Maria, age 12 Winter
Quiet, frigid
Blackening, icing, snowing
Flurries, chill . . . Sun, sky
Shining, brightening, cheering
Warm, shiny
Summer

Maria, age 12

]]> By: John Fiore http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/09/10/writing-diamante-poem/comment-page-3/#comment-412 John Fiore Wed, 17 Sep 2008 23:50:43 +0000 http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/09/10/writing-diamante-poem/#comment-412 Fire Hot, bright Burning, dancing, sweating Flame, spark . . . Frost, cube Freezing, snowing, shivering Cold, blue Ice John, age 15 Fire
Hot, bright
Burning, dancing, sweating
Flame, spark . . . Frost, cube
Freezing, snowing, shivering
Cold, blue
Ice

John, age 15

]]> By: Ethan Fiore http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/09/10/writing-diamante-poem/comment-page-3/#comment-411 Ethan Fiore Wed, 17 Sep 2008 23:45:28 +0000 http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/09/10/writing-diamante-poem/#comment-411 Fire Warm, smoky Crackling, popping, burning Flame, heat...Sparkle, snow Cooling, stinging, freezing Cold, harsh Ice Ethan, age 14 Fire
Warm, smoky
Crackling, popping, burning
Flame, heat…Sparkle, snow
Cooling, stinging, freezing
Cold, harsh
Ice

Ethan, age 14

]]> By: Christina, age 12 http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/09/10/writing-diamante-poem/comment-page-3/#comment-409 Christina, age 12 Wed, 17 Sep 2008 23:33:06 +0000 http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/09/10/writing-diamante-poem/#comment-409 Spring Warm, sunny Blooming, warming, living Beautiful, bright...Colorful, nice Changing, falling, cooling Wonderful, crisp Fall Spring
Warm, sunny
Blooming, warming, living
Beautiful, bright…Colorful, nice
Changing, falling, cooling
Wonderful, crisp
Fall

]]> By: Christina, age 12 http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/09/10/writing-diamante-poem/comment-page-3/#comment-407 Christina, age 12 Wed, 17 Sep 2008 23:31:57 +0000 http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/09/10/writing-diamante-poem/#comment-407 God Powerful, wonderful Forgiving, loving, caring Beautiful, bright...Dark, scary Sneaking, stealing, destroying Mean, horrible Satan God
Powerful, wonderful
Forgiving, loving, caring
Beautiful, bright…Dark, scary
Sneaking, stealing, destroying
Mean, horrible
Satan

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