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		<title>We&#8217;ve got (more) mail!</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 25 May 2010 13:00:54 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Kim</dc:creator>
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It&#8217;s always so encouraging to open up my inbox each day and find a glowing review or happy testimonial from a homeschooling mom who&#8217;s been using WriteShop with her children. It&#8217;s been nearly ten years since we first published WriteShop I and II, and believe me, I never dreamed the results would be so far-reaching.
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<p>It&#8217;s always so encouraging to open up my inbox each day and find a glowing review or happy testimonial from a homeschooling mom who&#8217;s been using <a href="http://www.writeshop.com">WriteShop</a> with her children. It&#8217;s been nearly ten years since we first published <a href="http://www.writeshop.com/store/proddetail.php?prod=0011">WriteShop I</a> and <a href="http://www.writeshop.com/store/proddetail.php?prod=0012">II</a>, and believe me, I never dreamed the results would be so far-reaching.</p>
<p>I&#8217;d love to share some of these comments with you. Be blessed!</p>
<h3><span style="color: #0099cc;">WriteShop I and II</span></h3>
<p>&#8220;Thank you so much for a fabulous two years!&#8221; ~Mindy</p>
<p>&#8220;Kudos to WriteShop! I have found your program to be the most clearly laid out program that I have ever used. My son and his friends went from whining about a writing project to being capable of producing a great essay in a short period of time. Best of all, they now <strong>see themselves as writers</strong>. I simply cannot believe the difference.&#8221; ~Kristel</p>
<p>&#8220;<a href="http://www.writeshop.com/store/proddetail.php?prod=0015">Write Shop</a> has been a wonderful program for us. I don&#8217;t think my <strong>dyslexic daughter</strong> would have ever learned to write without it!&#8221; ~Dena</p>
<p><a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/makelessnoise/242831712/" target="_blank"><img class="size-medium wp-image-4588 alignright" title="Mom" src="http://www.writeshop.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2010/05/Smiling_mom-211x300.jpg" alt="" width="190" height="270" /></a>&#8220;I’m using this program with my 13-year old son. I used it with my freshman-in-college son also. I believe WriteShop gave my oldest son amazing writing skills; in fact, <strong>he aspires to be a writer</strong>. Thanks for putting out an amazing curriculum!&#8221; ~Roseann</p>
<p>&#8220;We have used your products for three years and love them!&#8221; ~Lisa</p>
<p>&#8220;Let me tell you what a wonderful writing program you&#8217;ve created in <a href="http://www.writeshop.com/store/proddetail.php?prod=0011">WriteShop I</a> &amp; <a href="http://www.writeshop.com/store/proddetail.php?prod=0012">II</a>. I used it with my son, who <strong>received a journalism scholarship</strong> to Samford University in Birmingham, AL &#8230; Your material covered every reasonable thing he needed to know about sound, solid writing and enabled me to objectively assess his work. I recommend WriteShop to everyone who talks to me about writing skills.&#8221; ~Mary</p>
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<p>&#8220;WriteShop is a Godsend to us&#8230;Thank you so much!&#8221; ~Linda</p>
<p>&#8220;I love your program! I have taught in the public schools, and I have also homeschooled, so I have seen my fair share of writing curriculum, but this is the best. It’s not hard to teach from the teacher’s point of view, it’s not hard to learn from the student’s point of view, and&#8212;it’s fun! Plus, thank you for the twenty-two pages of word lists&#8212;they’re fabulous! &#8230;Your program has answered many prayers.&#8221; ~Sharon</p>
<p>&#8220;You should call this program <em>Writing for Children Who Have Mothers Who Didn&#8217;t Pay Attention in High School.</em> It&#8217;s just so easy to teach!&#8221; ~Becky</p>
<h3><span style="color: #0099cc;">WriteShop Primary</span></h3>
<h4><span style="color: #008000;">Book A</span></h4>
<p>&#8220;My son and I have already dived right into Book A&#8212;he&#8217;ll be starting Gr. 1 in the fall. I have been very impressed so far at the fun we&#8217;re having and how well this has been put together.&#8221; ~Dianne</p>
<p><img class="alignleft size-medium wp-image-4662" style="margin-top: 8px; margin-bottom: 8px;" title="Boy with pencil" src="http://www.writeshop.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2010/05/Grant-216x300.jpg" alt="" width="173" height="240" />&#8220;I am working through your <a href="http://www.writeshop.com/store/proddetail.php?prod=0014">WriteShop Primary Book A</a> with my 2nd grader. He loves this program. He told me that it is his <strong>favorite subject</strong>. He loves the creative part of dictating the story and illustrating it each day.&#8221; ~Tami,</p>
<p>&#8220;This is the <strong>best writing experience my kids and I have ever had</strong>. They are writing!!! My little one (Kindergarten) is writing as well as my 2nd grader and both are doing so much better than I ever expected.&#8221; ~Mia</p>
<h4><span style="color: #008000;">Book B</span></h4>
<p>“A special thanks to the dedicated staff at WriteShop for a wonderful curriculum! We really enjoyed using <a href="http://www.writeshop.com/store/proddetail.php?prod=0031">WriteShop </a><a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/msk13/2207091854/" target="_blank"></a><a href="http://www.writeshop.com/store/proddetail.php?prod=0031">[Primary]</a> together. It was challenging and rewarding, and also <strong>held his interest</strong> because of the subject matter and creative way that it was presented.” ~Julia</p>
<p>“My son progressed in his ability to organize his thoughts before starting to write, and he learned the importance of choosing the right words to express his thoughts…. I love the way the curriculum guided him through the writing process in <strong>small steps</strong>, and the way it offered me lots of options to tailor it to him.” ~Debbie</p>
<h4><span style="color: #008000;">Book C</span></h4>
<p>“My daughter, who has always loved to write, feels like she has gotten much better at writing paragraphs. I would agree with her! She&#8217;s never lacked confidence, but just needed some guidance and this program has helped her tremendously…. She loved <a href="http://www.writeshop.com/store/proddetail.php?prod=0041">this program</a> so much that she has been writing paragraphs on her own during her free time!” ~Beth</p>
<p>“I am thrilled with my 10 yo’s progress…. This last project was so encouraging!! It was a <strong>‘Yes! This is why I am homeschooling’</strong> moment…. Now he is much more OK with writing on blank page—once we stop and do the brainstorming! Since I&#8217;ve used your other products I must say—you do such a great job of breaking it all down—making the end project attainable. It’s fun to see kids even at this level able to make so much progress!” ~Sharie</p>
<p><a href="http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/05/02/weve-got-mail/">Read more testimonials here</a>.</p>
<h3 style="text-align: center;"><span style="color: #008000;">. . . . .</span></h3>
<p style="text-align: center;"><a href="http://www.writeshop.com"><img class="size-medium wp-image-4628 alignnone" title="WriteShop I, WriteShop II, WriteShop Teacher's Manual" src="http://www.writeshop.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2010/05/writeshop_books_i-ii-tm-300x147.jpg" alt="" width="180" height="88" /></a><a href="http://www.writeshop.com/writeshop_primary.htm"><img class="size-medium wp-image-4629 alignnone" title="WriteShop Primary" src="http://www.writeshop.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2010/05/writeshop_primary_books21-300x147.jpg" alt="" width="180" height="88" /></a></p>
<p style="text-align: left;">Visit our website at writeshop.com to learn more about <a title="WriteShop I" href="http://www.writeshop.com/store/proddetail.php?prod=0011" target="_blank">WriteShop I</a>, <a title="WriteShop II" href="http://www.writeshop.com/store/proddetail.php?prod=0012" target="_blank">WriteShop II</a>, and <a href="http://www.writeshop.com/writeshop_primary.htm">WriteShop Primary</a>.</p>
<h6 style="text-align: left;">Photo of boy © 2009 Kim Kautzer. All rights reserved. </h6>
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		<title>Book review: All About Homophones</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 15 Mar 2010 13:00:24 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Kim</dc:creator>
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The Confusing World of Homophones
&#8220;If your going too the movies, make sure you don&#8217;t by to many sweets.&#8221;
Your/you&#8217;re. By/buy. To/too/two. These often-confusing (and frequently misused) words are called homophones&#8212;words that sound the same but are spelled differently.
While the difference between its and it&#8217;s may not seem like a big deal to some, using these two little [...]]]></description>
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<h3><span style="color: #cc6600;">The Confusing World of Homophones</span></h3>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;"><em>&#8220;If your going too the movies, make sure you don&#8217;t by to many sweets.&#8221;</em></p>
<p><em>Your/you&#8217;re. By/buy. To/too/two</em>. These often-confusing (and frequently misused) words are called <strong>homophones</strong>&#8212;words that sound the same but are spelled differently.</p>
<p>While the difference between <em>its </em>and <em>it&#8217;s</em> may not seem like a big deal to some, using these two little words&#8212;or any homophone&#8212;incorrectly can make us seem ignorant and uneducated. You see, whether or not they mean to, people often form first impressions simply by reading our writing. Isn’t this why our shelves brim with English references, grammar programs, and spelling books? It IS important to us that our children write as accurately as possible.</p>
<p>It’s never too late to teach the rules to your kids. And if you didn’t quite grasp these concepts during your own school days, it’s not too late to learn or re-learn the rules yourself.</p>
<p style="text-align: center;"><a href="http://www.writeshop.com/store/proddetail.php?prod=0028"><img title="All About Homophones" src="http://www.writeshop.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2010/03/AAH-Front-Cover.jpg" alt="" width="222" height="288" /></a></p>
<h3><span style="color: #cc6600;">All About Homophones</span></h3>
<p><a href="http://www.writeshop.com/store/proddetail.php?prod=0028"><strong>All About Homophones</strong> </a>is an exciting new curriculum that will unlock your children&#8217;s understanding of these confusing word sets. Author Marie Rippel says:</p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;"><em>&#8220;Teaching homophones can be tough! They sound the same, but they aren’t spelled the same, and they don’t mean the same thing . . . [All About Homophones] is a complete teaching tool kit that helps you demystify homophones and homonyms for students. They’ll learn and master spelling easily through interesting worksheets and games they love to play.&#8221;</em></p>
<h4><span style="color: #003366;">One Book, Multiple Grades</span></h4>
<p>Take time to teach your children about homophones so they&#8217;ll learn to correctly spell and use these word sets.</p>
<p>Because the worksheets are divided into sections by grade level, <a href="http://www.writeshop.com/store/proddetail.php?prod=0028">All About Homophones</a> is perfect for teaching multple grades. One book includes <strong>reproducible worksheets</strong> for grades one through eight, making the program budget friendly too.</p>
<h4><span style="color: #003366;">Lessons You&#8217;ll Love</span></h4>
<p>The book includes a comprehensive list of common homophones and recommends which grade to introduce each one. And <a href="http://www.writeshop.com/store/proddetail.php?prod=0028">All About Homophones</a> offers a variety of activities that appeals to different learning styles: <em>visual, auditory, </em>and<em> kinesthetic. </em></p>
<p>These aren&#8217;t your ordinary dull worksheets! Whimsical illustrations and engaging activities maintain your children&#8217;s interest while helping them make sense of each new set of words. Here are some of the ways your children will learn about homophones:</p>
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<li><strong>Homophone Worksheets</strong> to reinforce reading and writing.</li>
<li><strong>Graphic Organizers</strong> to help teach the meanings of each set of words.</li>
<li><strong>Crossword Puzzles, Riddles, and Tongue Twisters</strong> to reinforce with fun and humor.</li>
<li><strong>Card Games</strong> with cards and instructions for playing several different games.</li>
<li><strong>Student Record Sheets</strong></li>
<li><strong>List of Homophones</strong></li>
<li><strong>List of Homophone-rich Books</strong> to read with your children</li>
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<p><a href="http://www.all-about-homophones.com/VCAB/" target="_blank">Click here</a> to see sample pages from <em>All About Homophones</em>.</p>
<h3><span style="color: #cc6600;">Now in the WriteShop Store</span></h3>
<p style="text-align: left;">We&#8217;re always looking for top-notch products that reinforce writing, grammar, and spelling, so we&#8217;re excited to announce that <em>All About Homophones</em> is now in stock in the <a href="http://www.writeshop.com/store/products.php?id=8">WriteShop store</a>. Stop in and <a href="http://www.writeshop.com/store/proddetail.php?prod=0028">check out this great new resource</a>. Teaching your children to use homophones correctly is one of the best gifts you can give them. Order yours today! </p>
<p style="text-align: center;"><a href="http://www.writeshop.com/store/proddetail.php?prod=0028"><img class="aligncenter size-thumbnail wp-image-3811" title="Order All About Homophones" src="http://www.writeshop.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2010/03/Buy-Button-150x150.png" alt="" width="63" height="63" /></a></p>
<h3><span style="color: #cc6600;">Homophone Humor</span></h3>
<p>If I haven&#8217;t yet convinced you of the importance of teaching homophones&#8212;or if you think your children can simply trust their spell-check to correct these troublesome words, you&#8217;ll want to read <a href="http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2009/12/30/owed-to-the-spell-checker/">Owed to the Spell Checker</a>. One of my favorite examples of homophone confusion, this humorous poem illustrates just how easy it is to mix up words that have similar sounds.</p>
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		<title>Book reviews: Betsy-Tacy and Betsy-Tacy and Tib</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 27 Jan 2010 12:00:22 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Kim</dc:creator>
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I’ve always been a reader. As a child, nothing made me happier than checking out a new book from the library.
OK, that’s not exactly true, for I also loved to read—over and over—the old friends that lined my bookshelf at home. Among those treasured favorites was a well-worn hardback of Betsy-Tacy, the very dearest member [...]]]></description>
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<p>I’ve always been a reader. As a child, nothing made me happier than checking out a new book from the library.</p>
<p>OK, that’s not exactly true, for I also loved to read—over and over—the old friends that lined my bookshelf at home. Among those treasured favorites was a well-worn hardback of <em>Betsy-Tacy</em>, the very dearest member of my small collection and a book I’ve read at least a dozen times since I was seven.</p>
<h4><span style="color: #7556a9;">Reviews . . . and a Giveaway!</span></h4>
<p>Eventually I read (and loved) all the <em>Betsy-Tacy</em> books, so imagine my joy when the current publisher—Harper Trophy/Harper Perennial Modern Classics—sent me the whole set to review and give away on my blog! I’ve decided to do the review—and the giveaway—in several parts, mainly because I haven’t finished reading the later books in the series, but also because it’s more fun to spread the love!</p>
<p>Today I’ll review the first two books in the early series: <em>Betsy-Tacy</em> and <em>Betsy-Tacy and Tib</em>. In a day or two, I’ll post my review of the third and fourth books: <em>Betsy and Tacy Go Over the Big Hill </em>and <em>Betsy and Tacy Go Downtown</em>. And on Friday, I’ll tell you how you can win the set for your own daughter, niece, granddaughter, or young friend.</p>
<h4><span style="color: #7556a9;">About the Early Betsy-Tacy Books</span></h4>
<p>Written autobiographically by Maud Hart Lovelace, and whimsically illustrated by Lois Lensky, the first four <em>Betsy-Tacy</em> books are a recollection of the friendship and simple little escapades of three best pals—Betsy, Tacy, and Tib—during their carefree childhood at the turn of the twentieth century. Though their life 100 years ago doesn’t much resemble ours today, their joys, worries, and adventures remind us that children will always be children. Even with a century between us, I still think these girls are among the most relatable children in literature!</p>
<h3><span style="color: #cc6699;">Betsy-Tacy</span></h3>
<p>Want a book that completely captivates your inner child? Never mind your daughter—you’ll want your very own copy of <a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0064400964?ie=UTF8&amp;tag=writeshop-20&amp;linkCode=as2&amp;camp=1789&amp;creative=9325&amp;creativeASIN=0064400964" target="_blank"><em>Betsy-Tacy!</em></a><img style="border: none !important; margin: 0px !important;" src="http://www.assoc-amazon.com/e/ir?t=writeshop-20&amp;l=as2&amp;o=1&amp;a=0064400964" border="0" alt="" width="1" height="1" /></p>
<p><a style="border: none;" href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0064400964?ie=UTF8&amp;tag=writeshop-20&amp;linkCode=as2&amp;camp=1789&amp;creative=9325&amp;creativeASIN=0064400964&quot;&gt;Betsy-Tacy" target="_blank"><img class="alignleft" style="margin-left: 10px; margin-right: 10px; border: black 1px solid;" title="Betsy-Tacy " src="http://www.writeshop.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2010/01/Betsy-Tacy-new-cover-199x300.jpg" alt="" width="161" height="243" /></a>How I love this book about the spirited, imaginative Betsy Ray and her best friend Tacy Kelly! When they first meet at Betsy’s fifth birthday party, the two become inseparable. They share all sorts of adventures on their safe little street at the very edge of town: supper picnics on the hill, playing paper dolls, dyeing Easter eggs, and dressing up to “go calling” at the chocolate-colored house with the stained glass window.</p>
<p>Betsy loves to tell stories, and even her make-believe experiences—such as floating on feathers or riding in a buggy pulled by a talking horse—will delight every young girl&#8217;s fancy. Experienced through Betsy&#8217;s and Tacy’s eyes, the ordinary days of childhood are somehow transformed into a magical place of wonder!</p>
<p>Just as Laura Ingalls Wilder’s <em>Little House</em> books deal with difficult issues in an age-appropriate way, the <em>Betsy</em> books are similarly sprinkled with reminders that a little trouble comes to all of us. For example, the subject of death is gently broached when Betsy, in her childish innocence, finds a touching way to comfort Tacy after the death of her baby sister. And Tacy, one of nine children, finds just the right words to encourage a befuddled Betsy at the “surprise” arrival of a new little Ray bundle.</p>
<p>This sweet book is filled with stories both humorous and tender, making <a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0064400964?ie=UTF8&amp;tag=writeshop-20&amp;linkCode=as2&amp;camp=1789&amp;creative=9325&amp;creativeASIN=0064400964" target="_blank"><em>Betsy-Tacy</em></a><img src="http://www.assoc-amazon.com/e/ir?t=writeshop-20&amp;l=as2&amp;o=1&amp;a=0064400964" border="0" alt="" width="1" height="1" /> a treat for the heart.</p>
<h3><span style="color: #cc6699;">Betsy-Tacy and Tib</span></h3>
<p>When my own daughters began reading the <em>Betsy-Tacy</em> books as young girls, I loved that they could escape into such an untroubled, innocent time and place to join hands with Betsy, Tacy, and their new friend Tib.</p>
<p><a style="border: none;" title="Betsy-Tacy and Tib" href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0064400972?ie=UTF8&amp;tag=writeshop-20&amp;linkCode=as2&amp;camp=1789&amp;creative=9325&amp;creativeASIN=0064400972&quot;&gt;Betsy-Tacy and Tib (Betsy-Tacy Books)&lt;/a&gt;&lt;img src=" target="_blank"><img class="alignright size-medium wp-image-3020" style="margin-left: 10px; margin-right: 10px; border: black 1px solid;" title="Betsy-Tacy and Tib" src="http://www.writeshop.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2010/01/Betsy-Tacy-and-Tib-202x300.jpg" alt="" width="182" height="270" /></a>As the title suggests, the inseparable duo becomes a trio when good-natured Tib Mueller moves into the chocolate-colored house on Pleasant Street—and the escapades continue!</p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;"><em>It was strange that Betsy and Tacy and Tib ever did things which grown-ups thought were naughty, for they tried so hard to be good.</em></p>
<p>Betsy is usually the ringleader, but Tacy and Tib participate eagerly. Whether cooking up a mess in the kitchen or thinking of ways to remember one another after they’re gone (think &#8220;hair&#8221; and &#8220;scissors&#8221;), their antics often manage to land them in a hot water. But when the girls are naughty—and it seems (in this particular book) that they often are—it’s always with the best intentions to do right; they even form a “Christian Kindness Club.” Even so, when Betsy, Tacy, and Tib do act impulsively, they experience conviction, remorse, and contrition, and their parents impose appropriate consequences. I appreciate that!</p>
<p>This book explores friendship, loyalty, and the joy and curiosity that come with being carefree eight-year-olds. Although they do get into occasional mischief, the girls set a positive example of how to behave in a friendship: through thick and thin, they’re faithful to the core; there’s no finger-pointing, quarreling, or envy among them; and they rejoice in each other’s successes. <em><a style="border: none;" href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0064400972?ie=UTF8&amp;tag=writeshop-20&amp;linkCode=as2&amp;camp=1789&amp;creative=9325&amp;creativeASIN=0064400972&quot;&gt;Betsy-Tacy and Tib (Betsy-Tacy Books)&lt;/a&gt;&lt;img src=" target="_blank">Betsy-Tacy and Tib</a></em> is a wonderful sequel to <a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0064400964?ie=UTF8&amp;tag=writeshop-20&amp;linkCode=as2&amp;camp=1789&amp;creative=9325&amp;creativeASIN=0064400964" target="_blank"><em>Betsy-Tacy</em></a><img src="http://www.assoc-amazon.com/e/ir?t=writeshop-20&amp;l=as2&amp;o=1&amp;a=0064400964" border="0" alt="" width="1" height="1" />.</p>
<p><strong>Note:</strong> <em>Betsy-Tacy </em>begins when the girls are five. By the fourth book, <em>Betsy and Tacy Go Downtown</em>, they are pre-teens. As Betsy, Tacy, and Tib grow up, the situations, vocabulary, and reading level become slightly more complex with each book. While a five-year-old would enjoy hearing <em>Betsy-Tacy</em> as a read-aloud, she may not show interest in the other three books until she herself is a bit older. But a 10- or 12-year-old is sure to enjoy all four in the early series.</p>
<h4><span style="color: #7556a9;">More to come . . .</span></h4>
<p>Stay tuned! I&#8217;ll post my review of <em>Betsy and Tacy Go Over the Big Hill</em> and <em>Betsy and Tacy Go Downtown</em> in a day or two. And then I&#8217;ll tell you about the giveaway!</p>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 06 Oct 2008 18:27:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Over the past several weeks, I’ve given you tips on how to write various kinds of curriculum and product reviews.

Part 1: Four Basic Steps for Writing a Book Review
Part 2: The Neutral or Unbiased Review
Part 3: The Positive Review

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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Over the past several weeks, I’ve given you tips on how to write various kinds of curriculum and product reviews.</p>
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<li><a href="http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/09/08/how-to-write-book-review-part-1/" title="How to write a book review, Part 1">Part 1: Four Basic Steps for Writing a Book Review</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/09/15/how-to-write-a-book-review-part-2/" title="Writing a neutral book review">Part 2: The Neutral or Unbiased Review</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/09/22/how-to-write-a-book-review-part-3/" title="How to write a postive book review">Part 3: The Positive Review</a></li>
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<p><a target="_blank" href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/makelessnoise/207756619/in/set-72057594057866398/" title="Smiling woman - Flickr.com"><img border="0" vspace="10" align="right" width="168" src="http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg40/hikimmo/WriteShop%20Images/207756619_0eeb47caeb-1.jpg" hspace="20" alt="Smiling woman" height="234" /></a>As we wrap up the series in Part 4, let’s look at the <strong>personal review</strong>. This type of product review <em>makes a personal recommendation.</em> It not only presents the facts, but <em>it adds the writer&#8217;s opinion based on her experience with the product.</em></p>
<p>So even though <a href="http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/09/22/how-to-write-a-book-review-part-3/" title="How to write a positive book review">Part 3</a> explains how to write a positive, opinionated review, using the materials is not a criteria. On the other hand, the personal review must be written by someone who has actually used the program, book, or product. She loves it and will gladly tell you why. </p>
<p>The personal review will include facts sprinkled liberally with opinion. The reviewer may also indicate how her children enjoyed the materials or how their skills have improved as a result.</p>
<p>The following review is written by a mom who uses and loves <a href="http://www.writeshop.com" title="WriteShop">WriteShop</a>. She glowingly describes how her kids&#8217; writing has improved, what she loves about the program, how easy it is to use, how helpful various parts of the <a href="http://www.writeshop.com/store/proddetail.php?prod=0013" title="WriteShop Teacher's Manual">Teacher&#8217;s Manual</a> are to her, etc. You’ll easily see how you can use this method to review any of your favorite products!</p>
<h3><font color="#006699">Review by Heidi Shaw</font></h3>
<p>for <em><a href="http://www.tosmag.com" title="The Old Schoolhouse magazine">The Old Schoolhouse magazine</a></em></p>
<ul>This is a GREAT program. I don&#8217;t usually start out so strongly but a program like this in the home school community has been needed for a long time. Let&#8217;s take a look.</ul>
<ul>Starting with descriptive writing, and carrying on with narrative and informative, WriteShop has everything you need to guide your students on the path to becoming excellent writers.</ul>
<ul>Sure, I can hear you say, but how will I KNOW they are becoming excellent writers? Aha, that&#8217;s where the beauty of this well laid out program becomes evident.</ul>
<ul>Lesson by lesson, step by step, the student is taught how to evaluate and improve his own writing. And the parent/teacher is taught right along with him. Every lesson has self-checking evaluation worksheets for both student and teacher. They actually teach us how to assess and edit every lesson. We start with describing an object and move on up through to conducting and writing an interview; the lessons are interesting and fun! Each lesson follows a basic format so it is easy to implement&#8230;. (<a target="_blank" href="http://www.thehomeschoolmagazine.com/Homeschool_Reviews/reviews.php?rid=1093" title="WriteShop review by The Old Schoolhouse">Read complete review here.</a> )</ul>
<p>You never know when you&#8217;ll have the chance to review a book or curriculum, whether it&#8217;s a brand-new product or an old favorite. Now you have the tools to write with greater confidence by following <a href="http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/09/08/how-to-write-book-review-part-1/" title="Part 1">some simple steps</a> and then deciding whether the review needs to be <a href="http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/09/15/how-to-write-a-book-review-part-2/" title="Part 2">neutral</a>, <a href="http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/09/22/how-to-write-a-book-review-part-3/" title="Part 3">positive</a>, or personal.</p>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 22 Sep 2008 07:01:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Reviewing a homeschool curriculum or textbook is different from reviewing a novel. In Part 1 of this series, I shared four basic steps to writing a homeschool book review, and Part 2 looked more closely at writing a neutral or unbiased review.
But what if you&#8217;re so impressed with a curriculum or book that you feel you MUST give an [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Reviewing a homeschool curriculum or textbook is different from reviewing a novel. In <a title="How to write a book review, Part 1" href="http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/09/08/how-to-write-book-review-part-1/">Part 1</a> of this series, I shared four basic steps to writing a homeschool book review, and <a title="How to write a book review, Part 2" href="http://www.writeshop.com/blog/?p=156">Part 2</a> looked more closely at writing a <em>neutral</em> or <em>unbiased</em> review.</p>
<p><a title="Stock Xchng" href="http://sxc.hu"><img src="http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg40/hikimmo/WriteShop%20Images/Joyfulwoman-1.jpg" border="0" alt="" hspace="15" vspace="10" width="198" height="307" align="left" /></a>But what if you&#8217;re so impressed with a curriculum or book that you feel you MUST give an opinion? More than simply summarize its main features, you want to share your enthusiasm and encourage others to check the product out, too! If ths is the case, you&#8217;ll want to write a <strong>positive review</strong>.</p>
<p>This type of product review <em>is designed to influence a purchase. It not only presents the facts, but it adds the writer&#8217;s personal bias.</em></p>
<p>The reviewer has not used the material but clearly loves what she sees, and doesn&#8217;t hesitate to say so. So when you write a positive review, even if you haven&#8217;t used the product, share why it appeals to you and mention the features that make you say, &#8220;Wow!&#8221;</p>
<p>If you&#8217;re visual like me, it always helps to see an example, doesn&#8217;t it? This review, written by Deborah Cariker of <a title="www.eho.org" href="http://www.eho.org" target="_blank">Eclectic Homeschool Online</a> intermingles facts about <a title="WriteShop " href="http://www.writeshop.com">WriteShop</a> with her personal excitement about the program, even though she hadn&#8217;t used it herself. While she stays focused on the program&#8217;s key features, she also manages to impart a &#8220;Where has this been all my life?&#8221; flavor to the review.</p>
<h3><span style="color: #cc0099;">Review by Deborah Deggs Cariker</span></h3>
<p><em>for <a title="EHO - Eclectic Homeschool Online" href="http://eclectichomeschool.org" target="_blank">Eclectic Homeschooling Online</a></em></p>
<ul>I met veteran homeschoolers Kim Kautzer and Debbie Oldar, saw their curriculum, and knew that I was looking at something special. I am a writer, but I never really learned how to write. No one sat down and taught me how to paint pictures with words. I did very well in English and Literature, but can&#8217;t tell you why. I won the National Council of Teachers of English award my senior year and had my essay published in an English textbook, but can&#8217;t tell you what was so special about what I wrote. I have believed throughout my ensuing writing career&#8212;for radio, television, newspaper, and magazine&#8212;that &#8220;my ability&#8221; is God&#8217;s gift. I also thought that this was impossible to teach.</ul>
<ul>Wrong! (<a title="WriteShop review by Deborah Cariker" href="http://eclectichomeschool.org/reviews/individual_review2.asp?revid=150">Read complete review here</a>.)</ul>
<p>Next week, we’ll close out our series, &#8220;How to Write a Book Review,&#8221; by taking a look at <a href="http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/10/06/how-to-write-a-book-review-part-4/">Part 4: reviews written by homeschooling moms who have actually used the products they&#8217;re reviewing</a>.</p>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 15 Sep 2008 07:01:47 +0000</pubDate>
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The Neutral Book Review
In Part 1, I suggested four steps to writing a book review. Today, let’s zero in just a bit more on the neutral review. This type of product review presents facts and summarizes key aspects of the product or book, and should include very little to no personal opinion.
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<h3><span style="color: #755185;">The Neutral Book Review</span></h3>
<p>In <a title="How to write a book review, Part 1" href="http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/09/08/how-to-write-book-review-part-1/" target="_blank">Part 1</a>, I suggested four steps to writing a book review. Today, let’s zero in just a bit more on the <strong>neutral review</strong>. This type of product review <em>presents facts and summarizes key aspects of the product or book</em>, and should include <em>very little to no personal opinion.</em></p>
<p>Sometimes it’s just best to give some examples. Below are some book reviews written by professional reviewers who did NOT use the <a title="WriteShop" href="http://www.writeshop.com" target="_blank">WriteShop program</a>. You’ll notice that the tone is, for the most part, neutral. Neither review gushes over WriteShop, yet both authors clearly favor it.</p>
<p>This kind of review is meant to give facts and to hold back on personal opinion as much as possible, but you’ll probably spot a few “bias” words such as “great resource” or &#8220;I like the flexibility of this option.&#8221; Still, all four reviews manage to keep their focus on the features of the programs without editorializing.</p>
<h3><span style="color: #755185;">Reviews by Cathy Duffy</span></h3>
<p><em>for </em><a title="CathyDuffyReviews.com" href="http://www.cathyduffyreviews.com" target="_blank"><em>Cathy Duffy Reviews</em></a></p>
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<li><em>WriteShop</em> is a great resource for homeschoolers because it&#8217;s written for the teacher who knows nothing about teaching writing. It features detailed, daily lesson plans along with student worksheets that cover not only the lessons, but also evaluation and grading…. (<a title="Cathy Duffy reviews WriteShop" href="http://www.cathyduffyreviews.com/grammar-composition/writeshop.htm" target="_blank">Read complete review here</a>.)</li>
<li><em>WriteShop Primary</em>, designed for grades K-3, was written by a different author than the original WriteShop. It has many of the same elements that make both programs good choices for homeschoolers&#8230;. (<a title="Cathy Duffy reviews WriteShop" href="http://www.cathyduffyreviews.com/grammar-composition/writeshop.htm" target="_blank">Read complete review here</a> – <em>you’ll have to scroll down.</em>)</li>
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<p>This next writer begins her first article with a bit of personal commentary before launching into the neutral product description and review.</p>
<h3><span style="color: #755185;">Reviews by Virginia Jones</span></h3>
<p><em>for <a title="EHO - Eclectic Homeschool Online" href="http://eclectichomeschool.org" target="_blank">Eclectic Homeschooling Online</a></em></p>
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<li>One of the gripes I hear from other homeschoolers and professional educators is that a lot of homeschool students don’t know how to write. I also hear the opposite—that homeschoolers have excellent writing ability. I think it depends on the family; if there’s an emphasis on writing, competent, perhaps even superior writers will result. However, writing often seems to be the last thing we get to in our day…. (<a title="WriteShop Primary review at EHO" href="http://eclectichomeschool.org/reviews/individual_review2.asp?revid=2873" target="_blank">Read complete review here</a>.)<em> </em></li>
<li><em>WriteShop Primary A Activity Set Worksheet Pack</em> is a set of worksheets used in the WriteShop Primary writing course. The set for Book A contains 20 activity pages plus two Primary Writing Skills Evaluation Charts geared to track your young student’s progress as you move through the program together…. (<a title="Activity Set Worksheet Pack review" href="http://eclectichomeschool.org/reviews/individual_review2.asp?revid=2866" target="_blank">Read complete review here</a>.)</li>
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<p>Next week, we’ll take a look at some <a title="How to write a book review, Part 3" href="http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/09/22/how-to-write-a-book-review-part-3/">reviews that offer a more personal bias</a>, even though the writers have not actually used the product themselves.</p>
<h6>Photo © by <a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/caitlinburke/" target="_blank">Caitlin Burke</a>. Used by permission.</h6>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 08 Sep 2008 08:01:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Have you ever wanted to sing the praises of a book or other homeschool product you absolutely love? You may have found that it&#8217;s easy to fill your friends&#8217; ears when you gather at park day, but if someone asks you to write up a review for your support group newsletter, you may have no [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a target="_blank" href="http://flickr.com/photos/tosaytheleast/2317331669/" title="Write - Flickr"><img border="0" vspace="5" align="left" width="188" src="http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg40/hikimmo/WriteShop%20Images/2317331669_1d67d1b040-2.jpg" hspace="15" height="331" style="width: 188px; height: 318px" /></a>Have you ever wanted to sing the praises of a book or other homeschool product you absolutely love? You may have found that it&#8217;s easy to fill your friends&#8217; ears when you gather at park day, but if someone asks you to write up a review for your support group newsletter, you may have no clue how to go about it.</p>
<p>Or suppose you want to post a review in your blog.</p>
<p>Or maybe you want to assign a book review to one of your teens as a writing project.</p>
<p>No matter who&#8217;s writing it, you&#8217;ll need a different approach to review curriculum than if you were to review, say, a novel. But it&#8217;s easy&#8212;and fun&#8212;when you have a little formula to follow!</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve seen three different kinds of curriculum or book reviews. You&#8217;ll choose the one that best fits your experience with the product:</p>
<ul>
<li><strong>Neutral review.</strong> Having never used the materials, will you simply explain the method and approach?</li>
<li><strong>Positive review.</strong> Based on what you&#8217;ve learned, will you also give your opinion?</li>
<li><strong>Personal review.</strong> Have you actually used the material? Can you review it based on your own experience?</li>
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<p>Regardless of the type of review you write, make sure you include some basic information to familiarize readers with the product&#8217;s key features.</p>
<h4><font color="#6666ff">Describe the Book or Product</font></h4>
<p>Start off with the basics. First, what is this product? What does this product cover? What&#8217;s included? Is it complete on its own, or will the parent need to purchase additional components to complete it?</p>
<p>Second, is it a book? Workbook? Is it hardback, soft cover, or spiral bound? E-book/download? Computer program? CD/Video? Game or manipulative?</p>
<h4><font color="#6666ff">Explain How the Product Works</font></h4>
<p>Describe its purpose. Tell how the instructions say to use it. Or, if you&#8217;re reviewing a product you&#8217;ve actually worked with, describe how you&#8217;ve used it with your own child.</p>
<p>Next, tell who the product targets. What age or grade? What educational method(s) will it appeal to? What type of learner might benefit from this product? Is it created for homeschool use? If not, is it easily adaptable to the homeschooling environment?</p>
<h4><font color="#6666ff">Express Your Opinion</font></h4>
<p>If you&#8217;re reviewing a product you have not used personally and plan to give an opinion, what appeals to you about it? What makes you excited? What do you think your children would enjoy?</p>
<p>And if you&#8217;ve actually used the product, how did it work in your homeschool? What did you enjoy or appreciate? Did your kids like it? Be honest but try not to gush.</p>
<h4><font color="#6666ff">Make a Recommendation</font></h4>
<p>Again, if you want to give a personal opinion, use your closing sentences to let your readers know if you would recommend this product. Would you buy it were it not already in your hands? Offer a professional review, one that is honest but not overly enthusiastic. After all, this isn&#8217;t meant to be a sales pitch.</p>
<p>Finally, close by providing contact information, including company name, website, email address, and phone number.</p>
<p>This is a simple way to get started writing a review. As you can imagine, it&#8217;s always easier to evaluate a book or product you&#8217;ve personally used. But eventually, you can begin having fun reviewing products you&#8217;ve never seen before! And if you&#8217;re giving an assignment to a teen, perhaps requiring both kinds of reviews will help strengthen some of her writing skills as well.</p>
<p>Next week I&#8217;ll give more details about <a href="http://www.writeshop.com/blog/2008/09/15/how-to-write-a-book-review-part-2/" title="Writing a neutral book review">writing a neutral product review</a>, along with some examples to follow.</p>
<h4><font color="#6666ff">Enter a Book Review Contest!</font></h4>
<p><a target="_blank" href="http://www.successful-homeschooling.com/homeschool-curriculum-review.html" title="Book review contest">Successful-Homeschooling.com</a> is sponsoring a contest with an opportunity to win FREE books! For every qualified product review that you submit by <strong>September 21, 2008</strong>, you&#8217;ll have various opportunities to win up to $100 in Usborne books!</p>
<p>So now that you have some tools in your belt for writing a great product review, what are you waiting for? <a target="_blank" href="http://www.successful-homeschooling.com/homeschool-curriculum-review.html" title="Book review contest">Click here for contest information</a>.</p>
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		<title>We&#8217;ve got mail!</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 02 May 2008 07:01:21 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Kim</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[I&#8217;ve been storing a mountain of emails in one of my Outlook folders&#8212;comments and testimonials from happy WriteShop users. Our brochures and website only have so much room for snippets like these, so I thought I&#8217;d give a voice to these dear moms and co-op teachers who took the time to brighten our day. Hope they [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/beija-flor/974031850/" target="_blank"></a>I&#8217;ve been storing a mountain of emails in one of my Outlook folders&#8212;comments and testimonials from happy WriteShop users. Our brochures and website only have so much room for snippets like these, so I thought I&#8217;d give a voice to these dear moms and co-op teachers who took the time to brighten our day. Hope they encourage you, too!</p>
<h4><span style="COLOR: #a38200; FONT-FAMILY: ">StoryBuilders</span></h4>
<p>&#8220;I am reallllly mad at you! These <a title="WriteShop StoryBuilders" href="http://www.writeshop.com/store/proddetail.php?prod=0022-people" target="_blank">StoryBuilders</a> have proven to be tooooo fun and my kids don&#8217;t wanna do anything else. Looks like math and science will be flying out the window today as we have already spent the morning writing from the cards and they are still at it!&#8221; &#8212;<em>Wendy</em></p>
<h4><span style="COLOR: #a38200; FONT-FAMILY: ">Co-op Testimonials</span></h4>
<p><a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/stevenfernandez/2270310995/in/set-72157603892063211" target="_blank"></a><a title="Happy mom" href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/randysonofrobert/439379636/" target="_blank"><img src="http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg40/hikimmo/WriteShop%20Images/439379636_deb3b99707.jpg" border="0" alt="" hspace="10" vspace="10" width="190" height="278" align="right" /></a>&#8220;I used the <a title="WriteShop I" href="http://www.writeshop.com/store/proddetail.php?prod=0011" target="_blank">WriteShop 1</a> curriculum with a <a title="Co-ops and classes" href="http://www.writeshop.com/coopsclasses.htm" target="_blank">co-op group</a> last fall and it was fabulous. Thank you for all the work you all have put into it.&#8221; &#8212;<em>Anita</em></p>
<p>&#8220;We had a fabulous year in our <a title="Co-ops and classes" href="http://www.writeshop.com/coopsclasses.htm" target="_blank">co-op</a>! It is so rewarding to teach writing and witness the drastic improvement in their skills. Many moms told me writing had become their child&#8217;s favorite subject, and they had always hated writing. I know I could not have had the success I did without this great program.&#8221; &#8212;<em>Debbie</em> </p>
<h4><span style="COLOR: #a38200; FONT-FAMILY: ">WriteShop I &amp; II</span></h4>
<p>&#8220;Thanks so much for all your hard work!  I just LOVE working with this program, and believe that it has really taught my children to write well. I&#8217;m using it this year already with my son and he is doing extremely well for a student who could barely write a sentence by himself last year! The other thing that I like about the program is the marking scheme. It really helps to have <a title="WriteShop checklists" href="http://www.writeshop.com/sample3D.htm" target="_blank">such an objective checklist</a> for marking the student&#8217;s writing.&#8221; &#8212;<em>Cindy</em></p>
<p>My son and I have really enjoyed using this writing program so much more than others. He is in 10th so we will be moving on to <a title="WriteShop II" href="http://www.writeshop.com/store/proddetail.php?prod=0012" target="_blank">WriteShop II</a> as soon as we receive it. His writing has improved tremendously since we started. &#8212;<em>Holli</em></p>
<p>Thanks so much Kim. Our youngest son is 16 now, and in a Christian/missionary kid school, but we&#8217;re homeschooling while we&#8217;re in the States&#8212;and <a title="WriteShop" href="http://www.writeshop.com/store/proddetail.php?prod=0015" target="_blank">WriteShop</a> was my favorite writing program in our 8 years of homeschooling in the past! &#8212;<em>Mary</em></p>
<p><a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/beija-flor/974031850/" target="_blank"><img class="alignleft" style="margin-left: 5px; margin-right: 5px;" title="Happy teen boy" src="http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1300/974031850_8ae14853a4_m.jpg" alt="" width="240" height="160" /></a>&#8220;I can not believe how quickly my kids&#8217; writing has improved using your curriculum for just a month and a half! After three years of searching, we have finally found a writing curriculum that we all enjoy doing. No more tears!&#8221;&#8212;<em>Sherri</em></p>
<p>&#8220;You did a great job with <a title="WriteShop" href="http://www.writeshop.com" target="_blank">WriteShop</a>. I have taught in the public schools and am now home with my teenage kids and have never seen a better writing program. Thanks!&#8221; &#8212;<em>Laura</em></p>
<p>&#8220;I want to thank you for developing such a teacher and student-friendly program. This is the first program I have found in nine years of home school that is incremental enough to take the teacher by the hand and tell her what to do day by day. Plus I much prefer your Composition Evaluation forms over other grading rubrics with squares, which left me with questions as to how to add up the grade. Your form explains exactly what value to assign every item that is graded.&#8221; &#8212;<em>Linda</em></p>
<p>&#8220;My son is 13 and we just started using <a title="WriteShop" href="http://www.writeshop.com/store/proddetail.php?prod=0015" target="_blank">Write Shop</a> and I am very pleased with it. One of the homeschool moms in my group referred it to a friend of mine,  and she referred me to it. They both think very highly of the curriculum and we are all highly recommending it to other moms in our group. Thank you so much for writing this valuable, much needed and fantastic curriculum!!&#8221; &#8212;<em>Susan</em></p>
<p>&#8220;<a title="WriteShop I" href="http://www.writeshop.com/store/proddetail.php?prod=0011" target="_blank">WriteShop I</a> and <a title="WriteShop II" href="http://www.writeshop.com/store/proddetail.php?prod=0012" target="_blank">II</a> taught my son a plethora of composition skills and, also, provided me with an effective method to hold him accountable to use what he learned. By (both of us) following this well-designed curriculum, he gained the tools to write confidently and effectively! We are pleased with the results!&#8221; <em>&#8212;Lorna</em></p>
<h4><span style="COLOR: #a38200; FONT-FAMILY: ">WriteShop Primary &#8211; Beta Edition</span><img src="http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg40/hikimmo/WriteShop%20Images/LessonC1-1.jpg" border="0" alt="WriteShop Primary " hspace="15" vspace="10" width="187" height="249" align="right" /></h4>
<p>&#8220;It&#8217;s very exciting about this whole WriteShop Primary program!! You all have a great product. I love, LOVE your editing and revising section in Lesson 3 (Book C), and I drew big hearts around #1 to remember to tell you I think this is great!&#8221; &#8212;<em>Wendy (test mom)</em></p>
<p>&#8220;I am impressed with the thought and planning that has gone into WriteShop Primary . . . there doesn&#8217;t seem to be a detail missed! Jack &amp; I are enjoying being part of testing the program.&#8221; &#8212;<em>Candy (test mom)</em></p>
<p>&#8220;We really enjoy this program and I am definitely seeing growth in my two students. We are thrilled that we have had the chance to test out WriteShop Primary.&#8221; &#8212;<em>Jennifer (test mom)</em></p>
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<p>To learn more about <a title="WriteShop I" href="http://www.writeshop.com/store/proddetail.php?prod=0011" target="_blank">WriteShop I</a> or <a title="WriteShop II" href="http://www.writeshop.com/store/proddetail.php?prod=0012" target="_blank">II</a>, please visit our website at <a title="WriteShop" href="http://www.writeshop.com" target="_blank">writeshop.com</a>. <a href="http://www.writeshop.com/writeshop_primary.htm">WriteShop Primary</a> is now available. Learn more <a href="http://www.writeshop.com/writeshop_primary.htm">here</a>.</p>
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		<title>Book review: Secret of the Scribe</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Apr 2008 07:01:55 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Kim</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[ I have always loved to supplement our history studies with historical fiction. I found picture books and novels aplenty when we were studying Greece and Rome, the Renaissance and Reformation, or the Revolutionary and Civil Wars. But ancient Sumer? The closest I could get was the story of Gilgamesh, but it’s an epic, not a [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p> I have <a target="_blank" href="http://www.brimwoodpress.com/productlist.html" title="Secret of the Scribe"><img border="0" vspace="5" align="left" width="240" src="http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg40/hikimmo/WriteShop%20Images/secretscribethumb.jpg" hspace="10" alt="Secret of the Scribe" height="372" /></a>always loved to supplement our history studies with historical fiction. I found picture books and novels aplenty when we were studying Greece and Rome, the Renaissance and Reformation, or the Revolutionary and Civil Wars. But ancient Sumer? The closest I could get was the story of Gilgamesh, but it’s an epic, not a novel, and not nearly so appealing to eight- to twelve-year-old girls!</p>
<p>Happily, both girls and boys alike will delight in <a target="_blank" href="http://www.brimwoodpress.com/productlist.html" title="Secret of the Scribe">Secret of the Scribe</a>, the first historical novel about ancient Sumer I’ve seen. Author Jennifer Johnson Garrity transports the reader back 5000 years to the time of <a target="_blank" href="http://www.wsu.edu:8080/~wldciv/world_civ_reader/world_civ_reader_1/abraham.html" title="Story of Abraham">Abraham</a> and the bustling city of Ur. Told in first person, it’s the story of a young girl, Tabni, who grows up in comfort as a slave to a Sumerian queen—until a great calamity forces her to flee the palace by night and make her way into the world alone.<span id="more-58"></span></p>
<p>Don’t we love <em><a border="0" height="1" src="http://www.assoc-amazon.com/e/ir?t=writeshop-20&amp;l=ur2&amp;o=1" width="1" target="_blank" href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/redirect.html?ie=UTF8&amp;location=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.amazon.com%2FBoxcar-Children-No%2Fdp%2F0807508527&amp;tag=writeshop-20&amp;linkCode=ur2&amp;camp=1789&amp;creative=9325" style="margin: 0px; border: medium none">The Boxcar Children</a></em> and <em><a border="0" height="1" src="http://www.assoc-amazon.com/e/ir?t=writeshop-20&amp;l=ur2&amp;o=1" width="1" target="_blank" href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/redirect.html?ie=UTF8&amp;location=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.amazon.com%2FSide-Mountain-Puffin-Modern-Classics%2Fdp%2F0142401110%3Fie%3DUTF8%26s%3Dbooks%26qid%3D1208218063%26sr%3D1-1&amp;tag=writeshop-20&amp;linkCode=ur2&amp;camp=1789&amp;creative=9325" style="margin: 0px; border: medium none">My Side of the Mountain</a></em>, where the courageous protagonists must live resourcefully on their own?  This universally appealing theme appears in <em>Secret of the Scribe</em> as well. As the young scribe Tabni weaves her narrative, the reader journeys with her by boat down the broad Euphrates River to the Sumerian trade center of <a target="_blank" href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ur" title="Ur">Ur</a>, where we experience both the grandeur of the gleaming ziggurat and the stench of narrow back alleys.</p>
<p>Tabni’s tale draws us in. We feel her grief and hunger as she finds herself homeless in a new world. We discover her pluck and courage as she forms a daring plan while living alone in secret. And we taste Tabni’s fear of vengeance from the many gods she tries desperately to appease.</p>
<p>In true “historical novel” fashion, <em>Secret of the Scribe</em> teaches the reader about life and customs in Ur—how people in this ancient civilization lived, ate, dressed, worked, and worshipped. Italicized words sprinkled throughout the book point to a glossary of unfamiliar terms, making it easy for the teacher or homeschooling parent to incorporate vocabulary into their Sumerian studies.<br />
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<em>Secret of the Scribe</em> would also make a great springboard into arts and crafts. The book introduces students to Sumerian trades such as weaving, metalwork, jewelry-making, and pottery, opening up all sorts of possibilities for accompanying projects. Trained as a scribe, Tabni writes on clay tablets, suggesting a project that dovetails art with learning about Sumerian cuneiform.<br />
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I’m so pleased to have discovered <a target="_blank" href="http://www.brimwoodpress.com/productlist.html" title="Secret of the Scribe">Secret of the Scribe</a>, published by <a target="_blank" href="http://brimwoodpress.com" title="BrimWood Press">BrimWood Press</a>. Though my own kids are grown and gone, this little novel will meet a tremendous need for those who hope to use historical fiction to broaden their children’s understanding of ancient Sumer.</p>
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		<title>Writing historical fiction: Spotlight on Family Tree</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 12 Mar 2008 08:01:09 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Kim</dc:creator>
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Did you know historical fiction is growing on your family tree?
Every young writer of historical fiction has plenty of inspiration just waiting to be plucked from his or her family tree. Family Tree enables students to harvest this vast crop by producing short (or long!) stories that are not only thoroughly researched and well-written, but [...]]]></description>
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<p><strong><font color="#6f370f">Did you know historical fiction is growing on your family tree?</font></strong></p>
<p>Every young writer of historical fiction has plenty of inspiration just waiting to be plucked from his or her family tree. <strong><a target="_blank" href="http://www.writeshop.com/store/proddetail.php?prod=0018" title="Learn to write historical fiction">Family Tree</a></strong> enables students to harvest this vast crop by producing short (or long!) stories that are not only thoroughly researched and well-written, but heirlooms to be treasured by your family for generations to come. <span id="more-29"></span></p>
<p><font color="#6f370f"><strong>Your Heritage</strong></font></p>
<p>Perhaps you know very little about your ancestors. Or maybe you&#8217;ve heard a million family stories and own stacks of vintage photographs. Either way, author Jennifer Johnson Garrity provides your children with all the tools they need to craft a realistic, historically accurate story based closely (or loosely, as the case may be!) on your personal family tree.</p>
<p><strong><font color="#6f370f">The Workbook</font></strong> </p>
<p>Presented in three phases—Research, Writing, and Editing—this easy-to-use workbook guides both you and your child through the process of gathering historical information, weaving fact and fiction together to create a plot, and then refining both content and style to fashion a unique and exciting work of fiction.</p>
<p>Chapters include <strong>General Research, Specific Research, Writing Your Story, </strong>and <strong>Editing Your Story</strong>, and include such elements as</p>
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<li>Conducting interviews;</li>
<li>Blending fact and fiction;</li>
<li>Using historical research and photos;</li>
<li>Planning the story; and</li>
<li>Adding interesting sentence structure and vocabulary.</li>
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<p>The guide is self directed for the high school or gifted writer, but there&#8217;s also an instructor’s guide and detailed schedule with extra tips and suggestions for homeschoolers working with younger or reluctant writers.</p>
<p><font color="#6f370f"><strong>Supplementing Other Writing Programs</strong></font></p>
<p>Published by <a target="_blank" href="http://brimwoodpress.com" title="Tools for Young Historians">BrimWood Press</a>, <strong>Family Tree</strong> makes the perfect supplement to any writing program, though Garrity worked closely with us to ensure that her material was compatible with <a target="_blank" href="http://www.writeshop.com">WriteShop</a>. She has incorporated a number of WriteShop skills into both the lessons on writing style and the checklist itself. Take a peek at the <a target="_blank" href="http://www.writeshop.com/downloads/FamilyTree_Sample.pdf">Family Tree samples</a> to view the checklist.</p>
<p>The workbook is designed to be consumable, but permission is granted for the purchasing family to make copies for multiple children and for multiple projects. Due to the vigor of the research phase, students will find a bountiful supply of family tales just waiting for pen and ink. Together, your children can build a treasured collection of family stories by reusing the curriculum as often as you like!</p>
<p><strong><font color="#5e2e0c">For more information:</font></strong></p>
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<li>Visit our <a target="_blank" href="http://www.writeshop.com/store/proddetail.php?prod=0018" title="More about Family Tree">Family Tree Product Page</a></li>
<li>View <a target="_blank" href="http://www.writeshop.com/downloads/FamilyTree_Sample.pdf" title="Family Tree sample pages">Family Tree sample pages</a></li>
<li>See <a target="_blank" href="http://www.thehomeschoolmagazine.com/Homeschool_Reviews/2407.php" title="TOS magazine product review">The Old Schoolhouse magazine&#8217;s review</a></li>
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